Wednesday 25 March 2020

Six Sentence story



My Six sentence about a movie in the park and about war

2 comments:

  1. Hi Melz,
    I enjoyed reading your movie story - is it based on a real story or did your make it up.? It is really a great story about friendship and greed and the ending has a really good moral. I think this tells me alot about you because the one thing I love about you is your strong sense of what is right. Keep up the great writing Melz. I will enjoy talking to you more about this when we go back to school. Love Mrs Bush

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  2. Good morning Mel,

    Great to see you doing your online work such a good story about friendships and greed something that you possibly relate too can't wait for more keep up the awesome writing.

    Tyson

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