About Me

About me - Writing

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Greeting: What do you want to welcome with? Kia ora, Talofa...	I kio rana my name is mel and i go to pt england school it's a good school for other great kids
Who are you? Name/ Year/ Teachers	Hi my name is mel and I’m a year six and i have a great teacher name Miss Tuia
Interests I enjoy, I like, My favourite	I enjoy eating playing or sleeping and My favorite thing is my family and drawing when i have the time
Sports/ Hobbies I play, On the weekend,	I play out or playing fortnite if were aloud to.
Other Anything else?	And i love drawing and playing with my friends family.

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I’M kio rana my name is mel and i go to pt england school it's a good school for other great kids

I’m a year six and i have a great teacher name Miss Tuia And my name is MEl

I enjoy eating playing or sleeping and My favorite thing is my family and drawing when i have the time

I play out or playing fortnite if were aloud to.

And i love drawing and playing with my friends family.

Table discussions

this is my Table discussions

Camp wrting

This is the Writing about Camp

Limerick

this is my Limerick

narrative

this is my narrative

I was so upset of the person because the person was coming closer to me and my cubs that’s why i was upset

The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her pace as she realised i was with in touching distance of with her lamb.She let out a loud low bleat which echoed around the paddock.The sleeping lamb lifted its head and turned towards us before slowly returning to its sleep. As the sheep got closer and closer i thought about whether i should turn and run i began to panic was she going to attack me?? Holding my breath i froze i sighed as the sheep as the sheep dodged me and run protectively towards its lamb fewp that was a close call.

Matariki Day

On Friday 8th June, we had Matariki Day. There were 4 different things, sports, arts and craft, cooking and movie making. I chose sports. We  got split up in 2 teams, yellow and green. I was in the green team. We played dodgeball first in the hall. My team won. Next we play Ki-o-rahi on the hard court there was to teams that was yellow and pink. The pink team won. I was in the yellow team. After ki-o-rahi my team went to cooking to make pikelets and rice bubbles and honey and sugar. It tased nice as like honey. We made lots of pikelets and  rice bubbles and honey and sugar. At the end of the day we had assembly and we went home. I liked the day because it was so fun and we did not have to do school work.

Narrative Writing

Once upon a time there was a small mouse that had a friend that had to go to another friends house.So his little friend mike the little mouse said i will help you if you do something for me.You will go get me a bread,drank and a chair please so his friend said yes so he went to a bread place and got a bag and he got one bread and then he went for another adventure to go get a drank.He went to a dairy shop to get a drank he got fanta.So he went for another adventure to get a chair so he went to a chair shop and got the chair.So he went and gave all the stuff to his friend so his friend took his friend to a green long pipe that had tagging on it so he went to his friends house safely.

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